I'm quite bored this afternoon (I'm taking it easy before starting college tomorrow), so I thought I'd do a little spelling and grammar check on her comment! Feel free to add your suggestions/corrections, I might have missed a few things.Anyone else remember the time that big Sarah tried to claim some of her family had actual proper jobs The only big pharma your family are likely to work in Sarah is the kind where their stock is smuggled in through the hole of a backpacker coming back from Thailand
1. "It's not the NHS that pay the fee. Unless there's something new going on here." Perhaps you should've used a comma and a question mark. "It's not the NHS that pay the fee, unless there's something new going on here?" Maybe cut out the "here"? Hell, even swapping "going on here" with "happening?" would be better sounding. Another tip - it should be "pay" should be "pays",
2. "Private drug companies fund the drug and the trails and then I presume, sell it to the NHS." First step, obvious typo. It's spelt "trials" not "trails". "Trails" are what your husband leaves wherever he goes with that grease. "...and then I presume, sell to the NHS." The comma doesn't sound right. It should go before "and then". "Private drug companies fund the drug trials, and then I presume sell it to the NHS."
3. "Unless this is a new NHS trail?" TRIALS. TRAILS ARE WHAT YOU LEAVE WHEN YOU MOVE FROM SOFA TO SOFA EATING GIFTED CHOCOLATE.
4. "I know this because like I said, Iv done many in the past and my family also works for such drug companies." It is spelt "I've" not "Iv". One question, what family works for "such drug companies"? Do you have cousins? Siblings? If you've done medical trials and you have family working within the drug industry, then why are you so suspicious of the COVID "maxxine" as you've called it in the past? Oh, is that because believing in medicine doesn't suit you anymore and you can make money exploiting your children?
2. "Private drug companies fund the drug and the trails and then I presume, sell it to the NHS." First step, obvious typo. It's spelt "trials" not "trails". "Trails" are what your husband leaves wherever he goes with that grease. "...and then I presume, sell to the NHS." The comma doesn't sound right. It should go before "and then". "Private drug companies fund the drug trials, and then I presume sell it to the NHS."
3. "Unless this is a new NHS trail?" TRIALS. TRAILS ARE WHAT YOU LEAVE WHEN YOU MOVE FROM SOFA TO SOFA EATING GIFTED CHOCOLATE.
4. "I know this because like I said, Iv done many in the past and my family also works for such drug companies." It is spelt "I've" not "Iv". One question, what family works for "such drug companies"? Do you have cousins? Siblings? If you've done medical trials and you have family working within the drug industry, then why are you so suspicious of the COVID "maxxine" as you've called it in the past? Oh, is that because believing in medicine doesn't suit you anymore and you can make money exploiting your children?
Again, if I have made any errors myself feel free to correct me.