You would have thought the brand manager would have asked her to run her copy past them. They would have seen her previous work to know her writing skills aren’t exactly snappy. Many brands issue suggested wording to avoid this problem.View attachment 1749570
Is this her big announcement? She told a hotel all the crap she'd like to see in her comped suite, and it's therefore HER suite. If the hotel room is anything like her house, I'll pass. Also, talk about awkwardly terrible writing. What does guest as you guest even mean?
I guess I need a PhD to figure it out.