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"First-person middle-grade narratives are engaging and intimate, however, no popular third-person novel engages readers as intimately as David Handler."
I...don't know where to begin. Ruby makes a grand, declarative statement about first-person middle-grade narratives, then concludes her sentence by veering off to talk about unrelated third-person novels.
The author of the Lemony Snicket books is
Daniel Handler. Ruby didn't just keep getting it wrong in her video. She got it wrong in
multiple written drafts of her essay.
David Handler (whoever he may be) is apparently both a man and the world's most engaging and intimate third-person novel, according to Ruby's garbled English.
This is just the first sentence and there are multiple major errors. And she says this was the
latest draft, meaning it was still in this much of a mess after several revisions.
She also goes on to announce that the book that she wrote for this module, 'Penelope Peppermint and the Silver-Tipped Octopus', fills a gap in the children's literary market. I guess that's possibly true; I don't know of any other novels for kids about an insufferable 12-year-old Tory girl and an octopus stealing from charities, so she'll be the first.