1. Wording in here is really unnecessary and somewhat insulting.
(First of all if you "barely" know her then why are you addressing her in such a tonally passionate manner, hm?)
"We barely knew you" is a poor way to express your not having gotten the opportunity to meet someone whole-heartedly, far less someone who has passed on, and I'm looking specifically at the word "barely" which is kind of an insensitive word in statements like these. Ain't nothing wrong with the word itself but in this sentence and from this person I'm picking up on a lot of informality that stirs these hints of emotional distancing (although the pseudo-emotion kicks in shortly, as we all see).
When someone dies, it's OK to acknowledge that you didn't know them well, but that truth can be offered in far gentler, complimentary ways such as "I didn't have the privilege of getting to know you very well" or "I wish I had had the opportunity to get to know you better," something that indicates that this person was damn well worth getting to know. "We barely knew you" is stiff af.
Just saying that connotation is everythaaang. Just because a word is denotatively (by dictionary definition) appropriate doesn't make it connotatively (by subtle implication) appropriate.
2. Repetition of "we"
Most of the time we use "we" because we are actually addressing ourselves and other people. (There are exceptions but they don't matter here.) She makes a pretty inappropriate remark about people attempting to "delete" Steph's existence (which is ill-fitting in this context of a heartfelt message, regardless of whether or not it's true).
So to continuously use "we" while weaving these sentiments, she's not only giving herself permission to generate unnecessarily aggressive and (likely) inaccurate/misinformed opinions, but she's also softening the unacceptability of those opinions by disguising them as being a communal entity. "Stronger in numbers," remember that one?
3. Yikes, "out-and-out abandonment of any last shred of hope" and that whole bit
What she defines as empathy is blatant, dramatic, self-serving pity.
Abandonment is no longer offering support or care to something, and it is voluntary. To say Steph "abandoned" her hope, willfully let go of something that we culturally perceive as a very good thing is, in this context (context always matters), illustrating her as a foolish, helpless person.
Abandonment is also considered a form of giving up. And giving up connotes weakness. And I know damn well I don't need to state in here that people who complete su*cide aren't weak nor incapable nor lesser than you or I in body nor mind nor spirit, and that it's wildly inappropriate that Alice deems it proper etiquette & permissible to detail her step-sister's grief, PERIOD, but in a manner that deduces her to a debilitated, feeble shell of a person determined to purposely desert her last hope and d*e.
Su*cide is not abandonment. It's unsought release from life.
4. (The description afterwards about Steph's plan is haunting and I just have no words for how repulsive it is nor am I going to decide to trigger myself, everyone in this thread, and dishonor Steph by dismantling it.)
5. She has some thoughtful, empathetic sentences in here, you know. Sprinkled in. Stuff you would read in a well-thought out, honest, and passionate post from a person who is not a narcissist. It's a shame that all of that is muffled by harmful garbage.
Thanks for reading this. Really. I blather but I'm grateful I'm listened to, especially when it isn't necessary.
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