It is, part has already been rescheduled for later in the month, but not sure about the other bits yet.
It is, part has already been rescheduled for later in the month, but not sure about the other bits yet.Is your work trip from this weekend getting rescheduled?
Ahh hun. That’s rubbish!!I am alive, just tired, in a crap mood and have loads of work to catch up on
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Baby 2busyshopping34 asked if anyone had a "jordie" accentAhh hun. That’s rubbish!!
but, question, where did the geordie chat come fromI couldn’t work out where it came from
The bairn @2busyshopping34 was asking if anyone was Geordie.Ahh hun. That’s rubbish!!
but, question, where did the geordie chat come fromI couldn’t work out where it came from
Baby 2busyshopping34 asked if anyone had a "jordie" accent
Ahh I thought I missed some chat… “the bairn” lol, very geordieThe bairn @2busyshopping34 was asking if anyone was Geordie.
But isn’t part of the fun to have an unreliable narrator? It’s Mia in your case, it’s John in mine - and yes, it’s a bit one-sided and/or flawed, but it’s fun seeing people from someone’s point of view and find out their motives along with the narrating character. Don’t stress yourself, hun, see how you feel.Thank you…
i feel like I haven’t been clear about something in it, because it’s only Mia’s side of the story, so maybe just doubting it at the minute. And I know everyone writes differently and it is just meant to be fluffy rather than intense, but still feel like it’s a bit… meh
just realised I put it as mature too, which it clearly isn’t… and I don’t know if I’ve got it in me to make it
Love you
All ok here… still waiting to see if we can have Monday off… no communications yetBut isn’t part of the fun to have an unreliable narrator? It’s Mia in your case, it’s John in mine - and yes, it’s a bit one-sided and/or flawed, but it’s fun seeing people from someone’s point of view and find out their motives along with the narrating character. Don’t stress yourself, hun, see how you feel.
How’s your day so far?
I'm going to try and work through lunch, so much to doAll ok here… still waiting to see if we can have Monday off… no communications yet
How’s your day been
What’s everyone having for lunch?
Wonderfully said.sorry for the longest message in the world
Honestly we are all our own worst critics … every time I reread my chapters before posting I think of how it doesn’t have that ‘spark’ in places and I get so worried even after posting!
What you have to remember is it’s your book so if you want to clear something up then you can do so (you can write a POV chapter or a flashback) but it’s yours to change or not change however you deem fit!
The doubts you have is because when you read someone else’s who are all drama filled and cliff hangers you can feel like a bit of FOMO for your character as you wished you could hav written that, same as smutty stuff ..I got it when I was reading yours last night thinking how you made this character so relatable unlike Alex and the reader so invested .. like I could read your book without John in it, with just character names as it is THAT good …but we all get like that!
and as for mature, it deals with mature themes and implied sexual nature and I think sometimes that’s better than actually reading It if it fits in the characters narrative and it really does with Mia, she would be joking about it or thinking about it rather than being there!
Take a breather, give yourself a chance to write where you want this to go and if you really aren’t feeling it completely then give yourself a space to add a break in the book and then you won’t feel the pressure…
But in my opinion it’s such a good book and you should be extremely proud
I'm going to try and work through lunch, so much to do
Had a cute NRO idea on way to work and now want to write even though Word is now closed.
Oh my, I had completely forgotten about the back to school / pre-school date. I hope all our mamas are doing well!!!That was fast!
Glad he went in ok. How are you feeling? When I used to babysit and I'd dropped the little one off when she started playgroup I was like 'wtf do I do now!?'
I can't stress how much I enjoyed it without sounding entirely inappropriate
I’m an annoyed, huffy cookie, apparently.You’re team neitheryoure annoyed with John because of what he said, but huffed with Mia because she’s being open minded
Fingers crossed you’ll get Monday off.All ok here… still waiting to see if we can have Monday off… no communications yet
How’s your day been
What’s everyone having for lunch?
Yes! Can't believe it. Will be running out door at 6 and work phone off at midnight.
My man PopeyI need a good goalkeeper for FPL, any recs?
TVM. I put Pickford in and he immediately got injured.My man Popey
so bloody excited for youYes! Can't believe it. Will be running out door at 6 and work phone off at midnight.
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I'm gonna cryso bloody excited for you
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