Hi!
First time commenting here, but I’ve been reading all these threads about Anna for quite some time.
By curiosity, I’ve started reading one of the modules of that 1k course that one girl in this thread posted. Although I’m not an English native speaker (Spanish is, in fact, my mother tongue), I couldn’t resist on commenting how badly these modules were written!
I don’t like to make fun of the mistakes made by someone who speaks a language which is not their mother tongue, like Anna, me or many girls who are writing here but we are not English native speakers. And because it's not our native language, I think we pay a lot of attention to how we write or the words. So, I’d have expected the same with Anna. She could have used Grammarly or any other similar writing tool!
Here are some examples, taken from Bonus 1: The Confidence Code (the file name is "Elite Scamming Bonuses.pdf").
1. “…I've also noticed that whenever I've invested in myself, the more I invested in myself, the higher quality partners I started to have to get. And so on, I also learned that when you work yourself in the personal development area and when you become more refined than when you yeah..”
WHEN YOU YEAH? Seriously Anna, what was your conclusion? What do you mean with “when you yeah”? WTF?
2. “I don't know. You know, there are all these things that are so basic. I mean, such a small thing as a bad breast, like a man can have been on a first date with a woman and everything about her was good, but then there was this bad breath that just put him off and ladies”…
Was she talking about having
bad breath or about breasts?
3. “And don't like, however, we do want to understand what are the things that are repelling, man, because when we become aware of those things, that's what method of awareness kicks in.”
What you don’t like Anna?
Also, commas can change an entire tense. In this case, are you talking to your ladies as they were a man? You shouldn’t have added a comma there!
4. “And believe me, ladies, that definitely requires a course on his own, but here we're doing the lifestyle transformation.”
On ITS own. And it’s “a lifestyle transformation”.
5. “No, but you get my message ladies. I want the man to, of course, to chase you. I don't want you to chase anybody.”
Anna, please never start a tense with “No”.
All these examples were taken from Page 22 and 23 (because my eyes were hurting after all of this)-
I think she wrote all these modules as she would be speaking. But there’s a difference on the way on how we speak vs the content written in a piece of paper.
Also, I would have expected that the text was aligned (with the justify option on MS Word).
She thinks that selling a poorly constructed course for 1000 USD to girls from less developed countries, like mine (Argentina) will make the trick. As that is her target of audience.
However, we are not fools and we are much aware of these tricks rather as the budget is tight here and we think a lot before spending such amount of money.