Who the flip is/are “they”?! Like others, I tried to read it with fresh (as a daisy…) eyes, and could seem glimpses of good writhing.
However, the lack of clarity with “they” was infuriating. Is it the roses? Is it the writer and her family (“they’d planted”.) The whole thing lacked clarity, and Ruby’s approach here shows a complete lack of understanding about what makes a good writer…
… good writers are GOOD editors! Look at a Ted Hughes or John Clare notebook, and they are showered with edit and notes. Look at a Joanne Rowling’s manuscript and you’ll find spiderweb scribbles all over it! For Ruby to post such an unabridged piece of writing, that barely looks like it’s been proofread, shows not only an arrogance but a complete lack of understanding about what it means to BE A WRITER.
And considering that this is her whole identity now, to quote Ms Hermione Jean Granger… it’s potentially problematic!